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Hoping to splash some color on this blog as its been a lot of greyscale work recently but there we go more fire witch concepts. this time her ultimate form
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Duel: Film Review
Fig.1 Film name: Duel Directed by: Steven Spielberg Starring: Dennis Weaver Year of release: 1971 The premise of the film Duel is that of a man who was simply being hunted down by an unknown man in a large truck. On the surface this does not sound like it would become an amazing film but the director, Steven Spielberg, managed to pull the suspense out of such a situation. While watching the film what one can gather that it is truly less of a car chase film and more of a film battling with the changing image of male masculinity as the second wave of feminism was gaining traction the world over many men where feeling that this would change the order of things. This one could believe that the directed even inferred to in the very begging of the film with the radio conversation where a man calls to a help line for assistance and says: "The questions says, 'are you the head of the family?' well quite frankly the day I married that woman that unfortunate
OGR 22/01/2015
ReplyDeleteHi Tumo,
Firstly - I'm not hugely encouraged by your engagement as evidenced by your blog so far, Tumo - for example, no reviews, and a like-for-like storyboard presented very poorly - and this from someone who likes to draw and draws well! I want to see you up your craftsmanship, your productivity and your professionalism, Tumo - everything is just so half-arses at the moment! Sort it!
The same goes for your story premise etc. Frankly, your story idea remains very opaque as presented here; it does seem too as if the 'Dentist's office' is playing no real part, and the significance of the umbrella is, as yet, not clear in terms of your premise.
I want you to upload another OGR today/tomorrow in which you seek to articulate your story idea more robustly. I also want to see the quality of everything on this blog - published under your name to the entire world - dialled up. I thought I made myself pretty clear in your WIM feedback... get on message, Tumo and do it quickly!