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Hoping to splash some color on this blog as its been a lot of greyscale work recently but there we go more fire witch concepts. this time her ultimate form
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Duel: Film Review
Fig.1 Film name: Duel Directed by: Steven Spielberg Starring: Dennis Weaver Year of release: 1971 The premise of the film Duel is that of a man who was simply being hunted down by an unknown man in a large truck. On the surface this does not sound like it would become an amazing film but the director, Steven Spielberg, managed to pull the suspense out of such a situation. While watching the film what one can gather that it is truly less of a car chase film and more of a film battling with the changing image of male masculinity as the second wave of feminism was gaining traction the world over many men where feeling that this would change the order of things. This one could believe that the directed even inferred to in the very begging of the film with the radio conversation where a man calls to a help line for assistance and says: "The questions says, 'are you the head of the family?' well quite frankly the day I married that woman that unfortunate
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ReplyDeleteThe goal of the project was to use graphic design and animation to present information in an engaging and fun way. To do this you should first avoid making a ‘slideshow / powerpoint’ presentation featuring long text explanations and static imagery – Unfortunately your film falls into that trap, it is in essence a static slideshow where the text is doing the job of missing graphic and animation – Generally speaking, there is one image, floating on the screen, with a text explanation. To put this differently, your film is ‘very’ underdeveloped and missing a high degree of content and work. This is a shame given the fun theme and what could have been achieved in the timeframe.
ReplyDeleteTumo, there is too much missing from this project to give you specific advice in this written feedback (we will discuss this in your tutorial) however generally speaking this is not the standard of work expected at this stage of the course (particularly given your abilities). The project is called ‘adaptation PROFESSIONAL practice’ meaning that the way in which you conduct yourself around your work is an assessable component (assessment requirements) - For example, the development, the refinement, and consistency of your work ethic. Therefore, I suggest that you consider this as part of your approach to Part B.